Monday, October 24, 2005

There's Wisdom in Women.

"Oh love is fair and love is rare;" my dear one she said,
"But love goes lightly over." I bowed her foolish head,
And kissed her hair and laughed at her.
Such a child was she;
So new to love, so true to love, and she spoke so bitterly.
But there's wisdom in women, of more than they have known,
And thoughts go blowing through them, are wiser than their own,
Or how should my dear one, being ignorant and young,
Have cried on love so bitterly, with so true a tongue?

Rupert Brooke 1887 - 1915

Friday, October 21, 2005

Brain Pain

A fresh tale has been eating away in my head for the last couple of months.
It will concern village life in England prior to and during WW1.
Concentrating on several individuals (brothers, parents, lovers).
The idea is to show dramatic changes to their approach to life,
to each other and to God.

One of the most dramatic chapters will concern activity in the trenches,
for this part of my research will involve learning conversational german.
To this end I have enrolled at learno.com which seems to offer what I want
and, best of all, it is free.

My first task though, is to build the various main character back stories, establish
a setting and develop the theme. So out with the aspirin and on with the story.

Thursday, October 06, 2005

Daily Grind - a Blessing

Rise between 6 - 6.30 gmt.
Cereal and coffee to break the fast.
Check emails (3) (daily).
Check blog (sometimes).
Visit spoiledink.com and writers.com (alternate days).
Pick three random nouns and type for 15 mins' (usually about 300 words).
Review previous days work.
Edit.
Type for the next hour with the interal editor turned off.

Thats' sounds easy enough doesn't it?
Ah but if only life didn't intervene
My life has the unfortunate habit of interuption
Of always sticking its' hand up and saying "here I am, do something with me"
It creeps up behind me usually when I am engrossed with the heroine or villain
and bangs me between the shoulder blades yelling, "well howdedode y'all"
That is the sour side.

The sweet side is when I see beautiful wife, my lovely daughters
and my absolutely fantastic grandsons.
I think, on balance, I would rather have life's little annoyances than not.

Tuesday, October 04, 2005

Word Verification

dear reader
thanks for spending the time of day with me.
but unfortunately I must ask you to stay a little while longer.
I don't know about you, but my postings seem to attract spam comments,
Blogger has a little trick designed to cut this out.
It is called Word Verification. You will find it under `Settings'
This should result in any automated spam messages being confused as they will require a human input to verify a printed word.
Unfortunately if you should wish to comment you will also have to verify a word.
Hence the reason for you to linger a little longer.

thanks for putting up with this convoluted message.

Monday, October 03, 2005

Sucking fingers

My digits need exercising everyday
it helps to keep arthritis at bay.
If I miss a session they moan and fight
like ten cranky old men
putting the world right.
So I type as often and fast as I may
churning out rubbish all night and all day.
From time to time I'll come up with a phrase
that suits my mood, that hones my gaze.
that points the way to that hard to start book
So I just keep banging away.
My hands can go suck.

Monday, September 26, 2005

If you can keep a cool head when all about you are losing theirs.

Feet on the Ground
At last the aftershock subsided to a bare tremor. Alan, white as a ghost, the skin on his knuckles almost opaque he had been gripping the edge of the table so hard, finally opened his eyes.
"Oh my God, " he said, "I hope that’s the last one, I can’t stand much more of this."
"Pull yourself together Alan," said Mary externally calm but churning inside, "tremors are a feature of life we have to get used to in these days of global warming."
"But not here in Birmingham, this is the UK, not Alabama."
"And this is the 21st century, you have to face it, times are changing in more ways than one, even the weather is up the wall these days."
"It’s just that you see such terrible things on the TV, people trapped in collapsed buildings for days, rescuers with masks on because of the smell of rotting bodies."
"What ‘s on the TV and what’s here today are two totally different things. We have no damage I can see apart from a few pictures out of place on the wall and dust everywhere." She looked at the dust and continued guiltily, "I just don’t know where that all comes from either."
" Mary I’ll be honest. I’m scared shitless."
"So am I, you stupid, stupid man, but we have just got to carry on as normally as we can otherwise we might as well shoot ourselves before the building collapses on top of us. And then, what if it doesn’t?"
Although Mary finished with a sarcastic tone in her voice she knew that normality had to be resumed as soon as possible otherwise Alan would totally go to pieces.
"So what would you like for your breakfast?" She said, trying to inject spirit into her voice "Cornflakes or toast?"
"I can’t eat," replied Alan, "I’m not hungry, my stomach is all in a knot."
"Well I just hope it never gets to the collapsed building stage because you will be hopeless. A dead loss. I’ll have no hero who will dash up on a white horse to rescue me."
Mary picked up the T.V. remote and tried but there was no response.
"Power must be down," she said, "I’ll try the tranny’."
"There you are, we’re doomed, doomed I tell you." Alan, prickled by the dead loss taunt attempted to laugh as he sought to introduce some cliched TV humour into the situation.
Mary smiled as she reached for the transistor radio, "that’s enough Fraser, but seriously, if the power’s down we are going to freeze, it is the middle of January after all."
The transistor radio clicked into life and the comforting tone of John Humphreys voice filled the room. "…confined to the Smallheath area of Birmingham. Electricity supplies have been interrupted in a few areas. The authorities will issue a statement later. Very little damage has been reported but we will bring any updates as and when they come in."
"There you are," said Mary, "outside this area, everyday life is going on as usual. Now what about that breakfast?"
"I suppose toast will be off the menu if there’s no power so it had better be cornflakes hadn’t it?" said Alan.
Mary breathed an inward sigh of relief and said "Coming up," over her shoulder as she walked to the kitchen.
Suddenly there was a knocking at the window, peering through was Alice, Alan’s sister.
"Come on in, the doors open." shouted Alan eager to be able to share his fears with somebody who might be sympathetic to them.
She came in wrapped up like an Eskimo, rubbing her hands, "Hi, It’s cold out there. I’ve been ringing the bell for ages, I think it’s broken."
"Never mind the damn bell, what’s happening out there?" demanded Alan.
"Well not a lot really, people just standing around talking and acting dramatic as if it was something serious. Bloody hell, I’ve seen more shaking at the Ritz."
Mary chuckled, thank God for `feet on the ground’ attitudes.

Friday, September 23, 2005

A new challenge

Hey everybody,
I have been challenged to write a 20000 word childrens adventure story for 8 to 14 year olds; in three months. Sounds a lot in a short time but really it works out at less than 2000 words each week or just over 300 a day. It doesn't sound to bad put like that but then there are the different stages of editing and redrafting to do so towards the end of the three months time will become something of a premium.

Having never even considered this genre before I thought I would not know where to begin. After a bit of thought the different parts are beginning to fall into place. I now have my main characters, my setting and my conflict zone, well sort of.
But once these things get together on the page they start to do their own thing so who knows what the end result might be.

Just thought you would all like to know, thanks for listening. Here goes...

keep tuning in for updates.